GnomeTales

Dear

Critique

First impression

It’s very rare that I see simple styles on here that are good and have some substance. Your style is one of those styles. Seeing the comics and instances and the inputs from Blue Gnome remind me a lot of the Saturday morning cartoons I grew up and how much I loved them.

Technique  

So strengths that I have certainly found in your work is your color work and your shading. As well as your use of shapes. The only thing I’d say to improve is your line work. Draw your lines with more confidence and they will come out how you want them to. Same for the shapes like, say around the eyes and the hat. Just keep a steady hand and draw with more confidence. I’d also play with thicker brush sizes, to see if it makes your shapes come out more. (try it if you want- you don’t have to)

Composition   

Composition for you and your character also seems very consistent. And I enjoy the storytelling of each task and each event from Blue’s narrative point of view rather than just Green.

Consistency  

I uh…I think most of what was consistent I think I explained in other sections. So more of for closing words or advice and such uh…

Yeah. Just make your lines and shapes with more confidence, keep that shading and coloring up, And….yeah that’s all I got.  

Hope this is a decent critique. Can’t wait to see more events for Green in this round!